Thursday, June 2, 2011

Red Rose...















Promises were broken and they parted
Leaving the red rose behind…
She lay there all alone.
Slept silently in the cold.
The Dewdrops were her tears in disguise…

A breeze gently kissed her cheeks,
But it couldn’t carry her fragrance afar,
Because she was withering.
Like those separated. Empty, loveless, hearts,
her petals scattered…

Unnoticed, crushed and young,she died
And faded away
Her untold story died along….
The once, beautiful red rose
Now sleeps deep down the earth
Alas! How many like her……….
              
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27 comments:

  1. BaibaJune 2, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    this is very beautiful :)
    And thanks for your comments.
    -B-

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  2. dzaroJune 2, 2011 at 9:15 PM

    red ross a symbol brave heart..
    lonely not always broken..
    lonely can mean grow up to tne better thing..

    thanks posting, you always creative and intelegent...nice from me..

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  3. BabiJune 3, 2011 at 3:35 AM

    beautiful haritha!
    xo

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  4. snehaJune 3, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    V beautiful....i am guessing 'they' means lovers?

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  5. HursHJune 3, 2011 at 10:51 AM

    thats lovely and touching.... :( :(

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  6. HarithaJune 3, 2011 at 11:10 AM

    @baiba :) always welcome
    @d'zaro thank a lot:)
    @Barb :) glad to have you back barb!
    @sneha yup "they" means lovers:)
    @hursh thankyou for the word "touching":)

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  7. HólabdaJune 3, 2011 at 9:49 PM

    Thank you for your kind words! A beautiful poems, and a google fordírtása not the real thing!

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  8. jojoJune 5, 2011 at 4:20 AM

    thanks... just can say the same...

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  9. Peaches LedwidgeJune 8, 2011 at 5:34 AM

    I like your poem. Young and talented!

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  10. TholibinJune 8, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    I really like the articles you post it. I also do not forget to visit ya ...

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  11. tour egypt clubJune 11, 2011 at 9:19 PM

    you are really talented , your words sensitive.keep it up
    www.touregyptclub.blogspot.com

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  12. IrfanuddinJune 12, 2011 at 1:27 PM

    beautifully done....:))

    Best Wishes,
    irfan.

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  13. HarithaJune 13, 2011 at 8:22 PM

    @ all .thankyou all for such nice comments:)

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  14. MostafaJune 20, 2011 at 1:38 PM

    Hi Haritha,

    Very descriptive and talented poem, you do magic with words..

    Have a nice day,,

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  15. Sherry Blue SkyJune 26, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    Keep writing your way through - write throughout your whole journey - it will be an amazing one. Beautifully written.

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  16. Sherri B.June 26, 2011 at 7:48 PM

    What a beautiful poem...I could feel the sadness. So lovely!

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  17. Liz Rice-SosneJune 26, 2011 at 11:15 PM

    Really well done.

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  18. AnonymousJune 27, 2011 at 12:50 AM

    As many as the wind can carry.

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  19. UnknownJune 27, 2011 at 1:23 AM

    Nice write. How sad that appreciation was not clear prior to her demise...
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/26/seven-steps-to-gehenna/

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  20. The PoetJune 27, 2011 at 6:54 AM

    So sad, but penned beautifully.

    Nicely done!

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  21. AnonymousJune 27, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    So beautiful and sad. I really love the imagery

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  22. Erika RTJune 27, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    a haunting snapshot of grief.

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  23. AnonymousJune 29, 2011 at 12:28 AM

    that's creepy.

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  24. Jo BryantJune 29, 2011 at 2:25 AM

    touching words

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  25. SrikanthAugust 30, 2011 at 7:06 PM

    Great haritha, its always your chance when its is a poem , u proved it again !!!! started loving *rose after this !!!
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    * nothing else , just a flower !!!!

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  26. snehaAugust 30, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    srikhant
    this is way too genius luvd it

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  27. HarithaAugust 31, 2011 at 11:15 AM

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!:)

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