Saturday, July 16, 2011

who am i?

Sometimes in my sky,
The sun forgets to rise,
drowning me in the darkness.
Somewhere far, the dark beasts wait,
to pounce upon me,to tear me apart...

Breathing fear, forgetting to scream
I run,
along this narrow winding road,
this empty mundane lane.
I fall, I bleed…

Who am I?
A blind butterfly dying in the dark?
A lonely loser without even a shadow?
The shaky stranger in me?

In this big bad world
I know,
I am nobody……..
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20 comments:

  1. snehaJuly 16, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    superb post HP!!
    luv d pic
    n lemme tell u tis - UR NOT A NOBODY:)

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  2. Crazy Life of a Writing MomJuly 16, 2011 at 5:27 PM

    Beautifully written. Oh and that picture is stunning! I'm a seamstress and now I want to make a dress like that :)

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  3. The PoetJuly 16, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    This poem is hauntingly beautiful, but oh so sad.
    Everybody is a somebody.

    Wonderful imagery, Haritha!

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  4. jesaykaJuly 17, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    another beautiful poem Haritha!

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  5. AnonymousJuly 17, 2011 at 5:07 AM

    That was beautiful but I hope you know it's untrue. You are very important to the world and a wonderful girl. :)

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  6. HarithaJuly 17, 2011 at 10:05 AM

    @sneha:)
    @elisabeth ,thankyou!wow! so u r a seamstress:)
    @Andy thats true andy:) thanks for visiting :)
    @Jesayka hi jesyaka!thankyou:)
    @Melynda :)

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  7. HólabdaJuly 17, 2011 at 1:45 PM

    Very good information! The image fits perfectly into the mood. Not a one, or someone very much!

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  8. deepsJuly 17, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    it must be monsoon !! :D

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  9. IrfanuddinJuly 18, 2011 at 1:38 PM

    nicely penned thoughts but why so sadistic...."No one is No body", in fact every one has got his/her own existence, one way or other.....so, cheer up now...:))

    Bets wishaes,
    irfan

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  10. HarithaJuly 18, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    @deeps ???? thanks for stopping by
    @irfanuddin thankyou irfanji:) sometimes this feeling haunts me:)

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  11. AnonymousJuly 19, 2011 at 12:41 AM

    Your comment truly made me giggle. I love you too sweet girl!

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  12. BaibaJuly 19, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    so beautiful, but so sad!

    and everybody is somebody in this world :)

    Yhanks for your comment, maybe I'll post some pics someday :D

    take care,
    -B-

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  13. AnonymousJuly 20, 2011 at 1:33 AM

    You make my day every time you come over and comment! Thank you!

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  14. smJuly 20, 2011 at 6:18 AM

    beautiful poem
    nobody itself says you are samebody

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  15. SearchofGodJuly 20, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    Nobody is perfect ! :D You are nobody :P

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  16. AnonymousJuly 21, 2011 at 12:16 AM

    Alright you. Time to write again. This old lady needs some good reading so chop chop get on it!

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  17. HarithaJuly 21, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    @sm thanks:)
    @searchofgot.hmmmm funny:)
    @melynda ;D

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  18. BikramJuly 22, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    Well how can that be .. if you are nobody how come so many people are reading what you are writing ..
    so there you go you are proven wrong .. you are somebody :)

    take care
    Bikram's

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  19. HursHJuly 27, 2011 at 6:44 PM

    you really scared me !!! with this post...

    But give a moment, even in that dark.. You might find someone, may be whoz just lost like you
    :) :) :)

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  20. HarithaJuly 28, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    @harsh glad to knw that it was scary!
    ya that can happen:)

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