Saturday, August 20, 2011

The song of a soul.


Free from my transient tomb,
Where I was enchained,
here I am, the immortal me,
floating over this azure ocean, under the moon light,
like a serene feather in the zephyr…

Even in her darkest hours,
Rich yet elegant is she, young nature…
Her splendor enthralling me, dazing me, even a void soul….
Ah! How well have thee painted the world,
with thy colours of nature…

As these glittering stars, and this silent night
lull me now
alone, alone and alone I glide,
losing my way to heaven….

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15 comments:

  1. sneha August 20, 2011 at 3:20 PM

    'losing my way to heaven'.....
    i luv this.

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  2. BaibaAugust 20, 2011 at 4:11 PM

    this is so beautiful! :)

    thanks for your comment :) when I come back, I'll write few posts about my trip :)

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  3. RHYTHM AND RHYMEAugust 20, 2011 at 5:12 PM

    Wonderfully beautiful a real joy to read.

    Yvonne.

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  4. indiwriterAugust 20, 2011 at 7:54 PM

    very genuine.. keep writing.
    cheerz,

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  5. deepsAugust 20, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    From the transient tomb to heaven…
    Now that’s a lovely trip unless you doze off in the silence of the night :P

    alone with the Alone ha?

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  6. fishduckyAugust 20, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    Lovely--you gave me goosebumps!

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  7. AnonymousAugust 21, 2011 at 2:40 AM

    I second what Fishducky said. Bravo

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  8. HarithaAugust 23, 2011 at 4:37 PM

    sneha,baiba,yvonne thank u soo much!!!!!:)
    indi writer thankyou:)
    deeps, interesting.if alone with the Alone means loneliness then yes i am alone with the alone:P
    FISHDCKY,melynda!!:(thankyou soo much:)

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  9. PeachesAugust 23, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    I like the words.

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  10. AnonymousAugust 23, 2011 at 9:42 PM

    Thanks for your comment today. How are your studies doing?>

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  11. deepsAugust 24, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    well...'Alone' usually has a spiritual connotation, can it be related to loneliness? I don’t know! :P

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  12. HarithaAugust 25, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    @deeps oh..well "deep" thinking....

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  13. MariAugust 26, 2011 at 1:19 AM

    Excellent! :)

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  14. GoldieZPFebruary 19, 2014 at 11:27 PM

    Very Nice! I also have a write- up regarding the soul within us (rather a chart in PDF). Perhaps this will be of interest to you.
    http://geula613.blogspot.com/2014/02/four-worlds.html

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  15. GoldieZPFebruary 19, 2014 at 11:27 PM

    Very Nice! I also have a write- up regarding the soul within us (rather a chart in PDF). Perhaps this will be of interest to you.
    http://geula613.blogspot.com/2014/02/four-worlds.html

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