Saturday, July 16, 2011

who am i?

Sometimes in my sky,
The sun forgets to rise,
drowning me in the darkness.
Somewhere far, the dark beasts wait,
to pounce upon me,to tear me apart...

Breathing fear, forgetting to scream
I run,
along this narrow winding road,
this empty mundane lane.
I fall, I bleed

Who am I?
A blind butterfly dying in the dark?
A lonely loser without even a shadow?
The shaky stranger in me?

In this big bad world
I know,
I am nobody……..

20 comments:

  1. superb post HP!!
    luv d pic
    n lemme tell u tis - UR NOT A NOBODY:)

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  2. Beautifully written. Oh and that picture is stunning! I'm a seamstress and now I want to make a dress like that :)

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  3. This poem is hauntingly beautiful, but oh so sad.
    Everybody is a somebody.

    Wonderful imagery, Haritha!

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  4. another beautiful poem Haritha!

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  5. That was beautiful but I hope you know it's untrue. You are very important to the world and a wonderful girl. :)

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  6. @sneha:)
    @elisabeth ,thankyou!wow! so u r a seamstress:)
    @Andy thats true andy:) thanks for visiting :)
    @Jesayka hi jesyaka!thankyou:)
    @Melynda :)

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  7. Very good information! The image fits perfectly into the mood. Not a one, or someone very much!

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  8. nicely penned thoughts but why so sadistic...."No one is No body", in fact every one has got his/her own existence, one way or other.....so, cheer up now...:))

    Bets wishaes,
    irfan

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  9. @deeps ???? thanks for stopping by
    @irfanuddin thankyou irfanji:) sometimes this feeling haunts me:)

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  10. Your comment truly made me giggle. I love you too sweet girl!

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  11. so beautiful, but so sad!

    and everybody is somebody in this world :)

    Yhanks for your comment, maybe I'll post some pics someday :D

    take care,
    -B-

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  12. You make my day every time you come over and comment! Thank you!

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  13. beautiful poem
    nobody itself says you are samebody

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  14. Nobody is perfect ! :D You are nobody :P

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  15. Alright you. Time to write again. This old lady needs some good reading so chop chop get on it!

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  16. @sm thanks:)
    @searchofgot.hmmmm funny:)
    @melynda ;D

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  17. Well how can that be .. if you are nobody how come so many people are reading what you are writing ..
    so there you go you are proven wrong .. you are somebody :)

    take care
    Bikram's

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  18. you really scared me !!! with this post...

    But give a moment, even in that dark.. You might find someone, may be whoz just lost like you
    :) :) :)

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  19. @harsh glad to knw that it was scary!
    ya that can happen:)

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