Friday, December 2, 2011


These responsibilities will tighten around my neck, asphyxiating me….
I would struggle in pain; in vain….
I would helplessly stare at my dreams, when they float like a fragile feather……Out of my reach, soon out of my sight, away, away and away….
This opaqueness, not of the future, but of the now, agonize me…..


  1. y hp??
    cmon jus hang in there...tats all any1 can do... & NEVER take yourself too seriously:)

  2. oops.. well responsibilities also make a better person out of us ..

    you take care and all the best

  3. I wish I could make you smile. The teen years can be such a sad & confusing time.

  4. Teenage years can be so confusing, suddenly realising there is a big wide world out there. Hang on in there.


  5. You penned down the anxieties really well. Beautiful poem.

  6. lovely poignant words...nicely crafted lines!

  7. hey, cheer up friend :) you're not alone in this world :)

  8. Hello.
    I know it can be difficult when you set goals & have high hopes, only to have them fail. Responsibilities too can sometimes be overwhelming. Keep courage & never give up hope. You are surrounded by people who love you, care about you and wish you much happiness.

    Nice profile photo. You have such a beautiful smile, don't be sad.
    Thanks for sharing.

    For ref:
    Our Candlelight Of Love

    If you need a bit of cheering up, check out the video of the shenanigans at my recent blog Party here...

  9. tak..tak...tak...
    it s wake up time :P

  10. What an inspiration name tag!

    Doesn't blue rose mean- mystery!

    Interesting poem you've written! I think the present/ the now can be the most difficult when trying to advance into the future. However the future is right in front of the moment that just pasted, so its always within your reach! It's like climbing stairs- one step at a time- I think its when you try to advance too fast that you can sometime fall down or trip or get slowed down.

    Advancement requires work- however the work doesn't have to be laborious- it can be a struggle- however the struggles will come to teach you and bring you closer to your goal- moving you on to the next step.

    Just keep pushing forward, always with a positive attitude; keep your focus on your dream/goals and you will get there!

    I too am a poet- hope you will stop by and hear my my ascent from a lower place!

    Much success to you! You can do it!!

  11. Much to think about in the last line. Wow!


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