Thursday, June 2, 2011

Red Rose...















Promises were broken and they parted
Leaving the red rose behind
She lay there all alone.
Slept silently in the cold.
The Dewdrops were her tears in disguise

A breeze gently kissed her cheeks,
But it couldn’t carry her fragrance afar,
Because she was withering.
Like those separated. Empty, loveless, hearts,
her petals scattered

Unnoticed, crushed and young,she died
And faded away
Her untold story died along.
The once, beautiful red rose
Now sleeps deep down the earth
Alas! How many like her……….
              

28 comments:

  1. this is very beautiful :)
    And thanks for your comments.
    -B-

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  2. red ross a symbol brave heart..
    lonely not always broken..
    lonely can mean grow up to tne better thing..

    thanks posting, you always creative and intelegent...nice from me..

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  3. V beautiful....i am guessing 'they' means lovers?

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  4. thats lovely and touching.... :( :(

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  5. @baiba :) always welcome
    @d'zaro thank a lot:)
    @Barb :) glad to have you back barb!
    @sneha yup "they" means lovers:)
    @hursh thankyou for the word "touching":)

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  6. Thank you for your kind words! A beautiful poems, and a google fordírtása not the real thing!

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  7. thanks... just can say the same...

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  8. I like your poem. Young and talented!

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  9. I really like the articles you post it. I also do not forget to visit ya ...

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  10. you are really talented , your words sensitive.keep it up
    www.touregyptclub.blogspot.com

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  11. beautifully done....:))

    Best Wishes,
    irfan.

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  12. @ all .thankyou all for such nice comments:)

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  13. Hi Haritha,

    Very descriptive and talented poem, you do magic with words..

    Have a nice day,,

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  14. Keep writing your way through - write throughout your whole journey - it will be an amazing one. Beautifully written.

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  15. What a beautiful poem...I could feel the sadness. So lovely!

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  16. As many as the wind can carry.

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  17. Nice write. How sad that appreciation was not clear prior to her demise...
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/26/seven-steps-to-gehenna/

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  18. So sad, but penned beautifully.

    Nicely done!

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  19. So beautiful and sad. I really love the imagery

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  20. Great haritha, its always your chance when its is a poem , u proved it again !!!! started loving *rose after this !!!
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    * nothing else , just a flower !!!!

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  21. srikhant
    this is way too genius luvd it

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  22. WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!:)

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