Thursday, November 24, 2011

BUT...


“In the night will the silver stars glitter,
In my heart will the butterflies flutter,
In the breeze will I hear your song,
In my dreams will you float along,
In your eyes will my heaven stretch afar,
BUT I wont ever know who you are….”

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21 comments:

  1. Preeti S.November 24, 2011 at 7:02 PM

    Oh, that was beautiful. Short, simple and so heart-felt. The rhymes were perfect and the repetetive structure of the line was really impressive. All in all, I loved it! :D

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  2. AnonymousNovember 24, 2011 at 8:01 PM

    Patience little one. You'll know soon enough. It's Thanksgiving day here. I don't know if you have this celebration but either way I wish you a day full of Thanksgiving. :)

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  3. Crazy Life of a Writing MomNovember 24, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    What a lovely piece! Those last two lines really left me thinking.
    I love the flow of this.

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  4. fishduckyNovember 24, 2011 at 11:20 PM

    Beautiful! Be thankful for today--& ALL your days!

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  5. fishduckyNovember 25, 2011 at 12:24 AM

    2nd posting attempt

    Beautiful! Be thankful for today & for every day.

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  6. HólabdaNovember 25, 2011 at 12:47 AM

    Gyönyörű az írás és a kép is

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  7. deepsNovember 25, 2011 at 12:08 PM

    maybe coz it happens at night, in ur heart, in breeze n dream...maybe hold ur feet down :P

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  8. RHYTHM AND RHYMENovember 25, 2011 at 2:49 PM

    Shrot but really beautiful.

    Yvonne.

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  9. sneha November 25, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    oh haritha!!amazing what u can do with words...seriously, magic
    & i think i know AND u noe who that is...
    not revealing more here.
    "Huge Fan" manassilayo

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  10. BikramNovember 25, 2011 at 8:13 PM

    I am sure one fine day you will know ..

    but reading the above comment it seems you already know SO what is it or WHO is it then ahmm ahmmm

    Bikram's

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  11. The PoetNovember 25, 2011 at 8:38 PM

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  12. The PoetNovember 25, 2011 at 8:41 PM

    Hello.
    Nice imagery & flow.
    Hope you get to know who it is, if you don't already (smile).

    A Sweet, Spanish Flower

    I'm having a celebration of sorts over at my blog. You're welcome to attend/participate. For more information, please click here... There are only 5 seats left, so hurry!

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  13. HarithaNovember 26, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    thankyou all:)
    @sneha HA HA .Thats wrong snake:)
    @bikram oh!huge misunderstanding there:D

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  14. HarithaNovember 26, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    @ANDY oh i missed the chance:)

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  15. SukanyaNovember 26, 2011 at 1:14 PM

    Small BUT... great.

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  16. FloraNovember 26, 2011 at 4:27 PM

    How are you Haritha?
    I just passed to say "Hi"...
    I remember my promise.
    I'll send you my e-mail soon.

    Keep dreaming, dear.
    Keep watching the night sky...

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  17. AnonymousNovember 26, 2011 at 11:42 PM

    Hiya.. my first visit here... will be back soon.. love your work.

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  18. BaibaNovember 27, 2011 at 10:06 PM

    I love this! :)

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  19. Peaches LedwidgeNovember 28, 2011 at 9:15 PM

    I so agree with Enigmatic Soul. Simple. Beautiful.

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  20. Betty AlarkDecember 5, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    I like to understand what the poet is conveying-I don't want to assume - so if you have time , I would like to know your meaning of this poem;especially the last line.

    It sounds nice- however I really desire to appreciate it- so if you have time.

    Thanks!

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  21. Betty AlarkDecember 6, 2011 at 7:42 PM

    Hi- I just received your comment- thanks!

    I thought that was the meaning - I just wanted to make sure! It's beautiful! Perhaps it will happen one day!! I hope so!!

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i would love to hear from you friend!

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